A Pail of Air
first for this series: Fritz Leiber is the first author included in
this series whom I have met—at a convention in London, Ontario
shortly before his death in 1992.
Leiber had a long, varied career, from the mid-1930s to the early
1990s. His long list of awards includes the Hugo, the Nebula, the
Locus, the World Fantasy Award, a who’s who of major awards. He
worked in a wide variety of genres: sword and sorcery (Fafhrd and the
Gray Mouser), modern fantasy (Conjure
science fiction (The
Stapledonian-scale space opera (The
and others. Despite this variety, I knew I would pick “A Pail of
Air” for this series, specifically due to this passage:
I asked myself then," he said, "what's the use of going on?
What's the use of dragging it out for a few years? Why prolong a
doomed existence of hard work and cold and loneliness? The human race
is done. The Earth is done. Why not give up, I asked myself—and all
of a sudden I got the answer."
always been a business of working hard and fighting the cold,"
Pa was saying. "The earth's always been a lonely place, millions
of miles from the next planet. And no matter how long the human race
might have lived, the end would have come some night. Those things
don't matter. What matters is that life is good. It has a lovely
texture, like some rich cloth or fur, or the petals of flowers—you've
seen pictures of those, but I can't describe how they feel—or the
fire's glow. It makes everything else worthwhile. And that's as true
for the last man as the first."
right then and there," Pa went on, (...) "I told myself that I was going on as if we had all eternity
ahead of us. I'd have children and teach them all I could. I'd get
them to read books. I'd plan for the future, try to enlarge and seal
the Nest. I'd do what I could to keep everything beautiful and
growing. I'd keep alive my feeling of wonder even at the cold and the
dark and the distant stars."
will this resonate with younger people? Let’s find out!
physics and geology of the story are hard to swallow, but are quickly
forgotten when we consider the ridiculous way the Nest works.
Spacesuits made of recycled plastic bottles and tape? Hacked together
spacesuits that can deal not just with vacuum, but with trudging
through oxygen snow at near 0K? We haven't even talked about the Nest
itself yet, a blanket fort with an open chimney into vacuum and a
pure oxygen atmosphere that it somehow holds onto. This just about
the limit of what I'm willing to accept for the purposes of a story
that is billed as science fiction. Even the disbelief of the other
humans in actual pressure suits doesn't change the fact that it's
just too far. Maybe if the Nest was pressurized, with airlocks, and
the air needed no be cycled to remove the high CO2 air while Oxygen
boiled out of the buckets. Maybe if the father's story included the
many years the Earth could hold onto an atmosphere just through
probably my biggest gripe with this story. It could've been written
in a more believable way, and it wasn't. The science is just too
wrong for me to enjoy it. Other than that, it's just a story of "we
thought we were the last humans on Earth, turns out there are more."
more I think about the story, the less I like it. When I finished, I
thought I really enjoyed the story – I wanted to read more about
the world, and the only thing that annoyed me about the story was the
fact that the narrator is a kid, and stories narrated by kids are
annoying. As I thought more, I realized that the other family members
were kind of annoying too. The mother doesn't do much (although I
appreciated the acknowledgement that at times she was the one who
kept the family going), the sister is even less useful than the
narrator, and at some points I honestly thought the post-apocalyptic
world was just a crazy delusion that the father brainwashed his
family into believing.
world and backstory were interesting. After the story ended, I wanted
to read more about the world, which tends to be my measure of a
“good” story. And I definitely felt like I wanted to read more.
But then I thought about it... do I? Other than the cool
post-apocalyptic world, what did the story have going for it? The
plot? It was fine, but not overly exciting. The characters? Not
really. The ending? I didn't really feel like anything interesting
happened at the end. Aside from my (completely illogical) belief that
the whole story was one big delusion, there weren't really any twists
or plot turns. So, was the story well-written? Maybe. Was it
well-thought-out? I'm not sure...
WAY better than Asimov, though.
it aged well?
It creates a world separate from ours, but familiar enough to be
relatable. Who knows how a lone family would act after 10+ years
without human contact with anyone else? Hey, I feel weird socializing
with other people after a few days at home – this is why studious
students are generally weird pseudo-humans.
a little frustrating that the mother and the sister are basically
like pets. They’re just pure instinct. The boy describes them doing
things, but they never have voices. Same with “the young lady”.
All of the dialogue in the story comes from male characters, except
for Ma’s line when they mention leaving, which is “But I wouldn’t
know how to act there and I haven’t any clothes.”
don’t know if the astrophysical aspects of the story are plausible.
It’s like magical realism with probably implausible details. Sure,
there’s such a thing as a dark matter star (?). And yes, elements
would reverse-sublimate like that (?).
reminds me of…
fiction books with good world-building. I kept thinking: okay, sure?
This is how this boy thinks, and it makes sense to him. Like sci-fi
hidden as fantasy, and the science is removed enough from current
reality to make advanced science seem like magic.
tone of the story reminded me of Oblivion
(a 2013 movie). That may be an insult to this story, but it has
the same sense of isolation. They’re in a pod separate from
everyone else, thinking that there are no other humans left. Anyone
other than the family is an alien.
scientist father is evidently a person who is good at doing, not at
teaching. The internal monologue of the ten-year-old boy has hazy
vocabulary which is overly simplistic.
the other hand, this benefits the story by making it long-lasting and
more believable. It’s easy to suspend your disbelief when it’s a
story from the mind of a child.
I looked up “pussy caffay” – apparently, it’s pousse café: a
layered drink that’s not so popular these days. Side note: “pussy
caffay” is a not a term you want to Google.
out of 10
of the better ones so far.
just can’t cope with the science in this story. They’re using
blankets to protect themselves from vacuum? They’re breathing pure
oxygen but they somehow haven’t turned their entire shelter into a
raging inferno? I don’t even want to get into the whole black hole
stealing the Earth and the atmosphere turning solid.
suspension of disbelief thoroughly shattered, I find the rest of the
story very lacking. Our survivalists are not-at-all-surprisingly not
the only survivors on the planet. I mean, if you can survive in a
blanket fort I’m pretty sure someone else somewhere will have
figured this out somewhere, out of all the people on Earth. I get
that they’ve been alone a long time, but assuming that they are
solely responsible for the continuation of humanity seems overly
self-important, not to mention impossible.
the parents called Ma and Pa just makes me think of the Little House
on the Prairie series. It felt like the author was going for the
American pioneer, self-sufficiency idea, up to and including them
rejecting the initial offer of civilization on the grounds that they
wouldn’t have anything to wear. I understand that they’re
supposed to be overwhelmed by all the changes, but it just feels like
I’m supposed to be admiring their ingenuity and independence, and
that isn’t at all the kind of story that appeals to me.
am very frustrated with the female characters in this story. Ma and
Sis seem to exist only to be clingy, complain, and be overemotional.
The nameless young woman that finds them is busy being objectified by
the 10-year-old narrator. The last sentence about maybe she’ll wait
for him to grow up made me very uncomfortable. An entire world that
he never imagined existing just opened to him, but he’s going to
focus on hoping this woman will wait for him to be twice his current
age so he’s old enough for her? Ending the story with this line is
a decision that makes me uncomfortable. It makes me think that the
author felt this was a hopeful, forward looking ending, when to me it
just came across as creepy.
started off disliking this story for the bad science, and ended being
angry about the treatment of the female characters. There’s really
nothing here to recommend it.